
Which were never mine . . .
They dived in vacant air,
They travelled miles and miles . . .
They swayed with the wind thay hugged them tight . . .
They were frightened by the barks of thunder . . .
Still they flew down . . .and down,
With a dream of something far cherishing . . .
When they saw the smiles of those flowers that swayed with breeze ,
Their hearts thrilled with ecstasy . . .
They tried to stay in air to see once more;
To see the lovely world they've never been . . .
They wished if they were hung in the wind . . .
But down . . .down . . . they flew . . .
And splashed on the dry earth,
With a fluttering dream that ne'er came true . . .
I'm in love with these raindrops,
And will always be . . . !
18 comments:
oh wow tarana ur lines r simply superb..
Poems...good ones....
gives me the impetus to finish the ones that I left midway...
keep going..
Thanks for the comment in our group blog - The electrical & electronics batch of 2008, NIT- Calicut...
I write at Quest and Earth Matters :)(links tru my profile page)
Btw didnt find the blog stupid!
heyy no need of thanks....
anyways ur blog was supercool..
im jus' a starter...do support me...c ya.....
hey beautiful poetry.. ..simply superb.. seriously if uve got lots you shud consider publishing it or sumthing.. just for ur creativity's sake atleast..
a blog is a good outlet for creativity isnt it?
hari vishnu...
wow...that ws something special hear.....thanks a lot...
i always considered them as my blunders...bt its gr8 to hear ur words....
have you changed ur blog author name again ? semi-crack? :-o
And do change the timezone of ur blog under formatting.....
blunders? lol.. yea i look back at my petry and think that way too.. but ur poetry is truly nice..
keep writin ofcourse..
did u change ur profile name again? y?
hari,
heyy dats more dan wt i deserve...anyways thanks a lot dear....
nd abt profile name...changed it jus simply...aarka oru change ishtallaathath....
thanks for your comment
We were also beginners once :)
Dashboard>settings of ur blog> formatting > +05:30IST under timezone..
are the poems from ur collection that u hav written? so there must be plenty more isnt it?
Welcome to my 2 blogs too
http://questbeyondeternity.blogspot.com
http://unrevealingnature.blogspot.com
heyy shobna...u r welcome....
viajero,
thanks 4 helping me..
ya these r from ma collectn...i used to write in ma journal(i ve 3 of dem..)these r all written b4 2 or 3 yrs(in ma 9th nd 10th classes)....now lost in touch with all...dr! u knw i hate to read ma works...its ma frnd who asked to put it up in a blog.....
nd thanks 4 inviting me 2 visit ur blogs....
c ya....
hey thanks for the comment but I didn't understand your Q: so wr did u join?
yaar...i mean after ur 12th wr did u join..?
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