Friday, June 20, 2008

I'm in LOVE...!

I'm in love with those rain drops,
Which were never mine . . .

They dived in vacant air,

They travelled miles and miles . . .

They swayed with the wind thay hugged them tight . . .

They were frightened by the barks of thunder . . .

Still they flew down . . .and down,

With a dream of something far cherishing . . .

When they saw the smiles of those flowers that swayed with breeze ,
Their hearts thrilled with ecstasy . . .

They tried to stay in air to see once more;
To see the lovely world they've never been . . .

They wished if they were hung in the wind . . .

But down . . .down . . . they flew . . .

And splashed on the dry earth,
With a fluttering dream that ne'er came true . . .

I'm in love with these raindrops,
And will always be . . . !

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

oh wow tarana ur lines r simply superb..

Quest said...

Poems...good ones....
gives me the impetus to finish the ones that I left midway...

keep going..

Quest said...

Thanks for the comment in our group blog - The electrical & electronics batch of 2008, NIT- Calicut...

I write at Quest and Earth Matters :)(links tru my profile page)

Btw didnt find the blog stupid!

tarana said...

heyy no need of thanks....
anyways ur blog was supercool..
im jus' a starter...do support me...c ya.....

Hari Vishnu said...

hey beautiful poetry.. ..simply superb.. seriously if uve got lots you shud consider publishing it or sumthing.. just for ur creativity's sake atleast..

a blog is a good outlet for creativity isnt it?

tarana said...

hari vishnu...
wow...that ws something special hear.....thanks a lot...
i always considered them as my blunders...bt its gr8 to hear ur words....

Quest said...

have you changed ur blog author name again ? semi-crack? :-o

Quest said...

And do change the timezone of ur blog under formatting.....

tarana said...
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Hari Vishnu said...

blunders? lol.. yea i look back at my petry and think that way too.. but ur poetry is truly nice..

keep writin ofcourse..

did u change ur profile name again? y?

tarana said...

hari,
heyy dats more dan wt i deserve...anyways thanks a lot dear....
nd abt profile name...changed it jus simply...aarka oru change ishtallaathath....

Priya Joyce said...

thanks for your comment

Quest said...
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Quest said...

We were also beginners once :)

Dashboard>settings of ur blog> formatting > +05:30IST under timezone..

are the poems from ur collection that u hav written? so there must be plenty more isnt it?

Welcome to my 2 blogs too
http://questbeyondeternity.blogspot.com
http://unrevealingnature.blogspot.com

tarana said...

heyy shobna...u r welcome....

tarana said...

viajero,

thanks 4 helping me..
ya these r from ma collectn...i used to write in ma journal(i ve 3 of dem..)these r all written b4 2 or 3 yrs(in ma 9th nd 10th classes)....now lost in touch with all...dr! u knw i hate to read ma works...its ma frnd who asked to put it up in a blog.....

nd thanks 4 inviting me 2 visit ur blogs....

c ya....

Priya Joyce said...

hey thanks for the comment but I didn't understand your Q: so wr did u join?

tarana said...

yaar...i mean after ur 12th wr did u join..?